Talofa welcome back today I'm going to show you a story about and under water ahlete.
On your marks,get set,Bang!.I jumped in to the pool.Number 42 representing New Zealand as an under water athlete.I sprinted and I jumped over the hurdles.I thought my hair was waving around but I forgot my I have short hair.My muscle's were failing me but I kept on going until I saw the finish line. The only thing standing right in front of me was fish.I sprinted as hard as can through the fish and I won!
OUCH Vaoiva,that hurt!How did you manage to run through me?.
ReplyDeleteGreat choice of words.They made me want to read until I got to the end.Now I can go and rest.
Talofa Vaoiva.
ReplyDeleteNice picture you have underwater.
I like it because its a short story and lots of writing but not as usable.
I like when you said representing New Zealand because its our country.
hi vaoiva I liked your picture nice job and i read the the whole Writing
ReplyDeleteka pai.