Namaste everybody today I'm going to tell you why Kids should do chores to get pocket money.Hope you enjoy BYE.
Kids should chores to earn pocket money.
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I strongly agree that kids should do chores to earn money.
Kids have to do chores anyway, so they should earn money for working.
I’m going to tell you three reasons and examples about the reasons.
First, when they have their own money, kids can buy what they want
For example if you buy your own stuff with your own money then you can keep it in your room so your siblings don’t find out.
If you buy your own stuff your siblings tell your parents then you will get in trouble.If you talk to your parents and remind them you paid for it they might not make you share.
If you buy your own stuff, if you're an angel sibling you might give your sibling a little treat. It feels nice to buy things for others sometimes.
Another reason, kids can stop asking their parents for money.
For me I have asked my parents for money and they got mad at me because when they gave me money I kept on asking them for more money.But now I have my own money.
If your parents are mad at you and you want money but they won’t give you.Don’t worry you got your own money.
If your parents won’t give you money don’t worry you got your own money saved up.
Finally, kids can maybe save up for college.
If you maybe do this for a long time you can save up.
If you save up for college it might be a long time but it’s worth it because your parents won’t have to pay.
If your parents are poor you can pay for your college yourself.
In conclusion I love to hear jingle jingle as the coins in my pocket tap each other, so yeah do you agree with me children should do chores to get pocket money.
I love your use of personification. You have given good examples for why children should earn money for doing chores. You have given a good personal experience that happened to you when you needed to ask for money. Lets work together to recraft the structure to help your writing to flow. You have done a wonderful job with your writing. Ka pai!
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