In writing we have been finding adjectives. An adjectives describes. Then we had to write a short story and use some good adjectives to help make our writing interesting.Here is my story.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, November 19, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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WOW Vaoiva....a pet rhinoceros.I wonder what you are going to feed it.
ReplyDeleteYou know that they like to sleep in a humongous bed with a huge,fluffy pillow.They like to have a shower with lukewarm water.They brush their teeth with a broom that has hard bristles and did I mention....they SNORE!
Hello Vaoiva.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
I hope you are having a wonderful holiday and I can't wait to see what you have been doing.
Hello Vaoiva.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
I can't wait to see what you learning you have been doing over these long holidays.
Hello Vaoiva.
ReplyDeleteI was just checking your blog to see if you had completed any of the SLJ activities.
What have you been doing these holidays?.
Samantha and I have been fairly busy.We went to mini golf a couple of weeks ago.We then went for a hot chocolate and a piece of cake.
Tomorrow we are hoping to go to Willowbank to feed the lemurs and check out the other animals.
me to I went mini colf on christmas and went hieking and I don't really remember the day we went.and sorry for not replying to your coments I will see you tommorrow and I hope you bring your elastics.
DeleteHello Vaoiva.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I visited your blog tonight.
I can't wait to see what you have been up to over these long holidays.
Hello Vaoiva.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have visited your blog today.
Have a wonderful last week off school.I am looking to hearing about hwat you have been doing.
All the best.
Hello Vaoiva.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have checked out your blog tonight.
I am looking forward to seeing your new posts for Term 1.