Today I'm going to show you about my poem it all about vegetables and flowers so I picked a vegetable and I picked a broccoli.And it was so hard but I got some help.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today I'm going to show you about my poem it all about vegetables and flowers so I picked a vegetable and I picked a broccoli.And it was so hard but I got some help.
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Hello Vaoiva.
ReplyDeleteThis is one vegetable that I don't each much of.We grow it to feed it to our birds.
Maybe I should cook it with some cauliflower and then top it off with some white sauce.
I like your choice of words to tell us about a vegetable that isn't very scrummy-in my opinion:).
Have a wonderful holiday and I can't wait to see what you have been doing.